DO I LOOK AWAKE?
"You look tired..."
"Really? That's funny.
I slept like a log last night."
"Does a log normally look tired?"
"Go to hell. I was feeling pretty good today
until you decided to tell me how I look."
"Maybe a sleeping pill..."
"I slept well. I slept great.
If I look like shit, it's because
of people like you pissing me off."
"Hey, no need to get snippy.
I was just concerned because
you look like you could use some shut eye."
"I could use some shut up."
"I really don't know why I bother talking to you."
Monday, August 23, 2010
Do I Look Awake?
Here's a fantastic poem I wrote just a minute ago. I really enjoy the dialogue-driven ones... They make me chuckle.